ahem. I'm so behind my reading, I have yet to catch up with the Pirates of Vengance! but this, mmm, this was great! Your J'onn voice is perfect, so colected and full of love, he's so captable! and hs wry humor is great, hilarious in its mischief. And Wally just.. goes with the flow, he gives as good as he gets. This is really sweet, really full of love. Your depiction of alien sex is great! very... sensual, to quote Wally XD
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on 2006-11-11 08:01 pm (UTC)ahem. I'm so behind my reading, I have yet to catch up with the Pirates of Vengance! but this, mmm, this was great! Your J'onn voice is perfect, so colected and full of love, he's so captable! and hs wry humor is great, hilarious in its mischief. And Wally just.. goes with the flow, he gives as good as he gets. This is really sweet, really full of love. Your depiction of alien sex is great! very... sensual, to quote Wally XD