Fascinating and exciting and interesting and satisfying! The whole tangling of thoughts and personalities is just riveting, and the way that's affecting the team is especially intriguing. And then there are just Wally-esque touches:
She turned red and laughed uncomfortably, until she just sighed. "I wish." Not quite the reaction he'd been going for, not that he'd thought that part through at all.
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on 2007-02-13 09:50 am (UTC)She turned red and laughed uncomfortably, until she just sighed. "I wish." Not quite the reaction he'd been going for, not that he'd thought that part through at all.
Aw. Poor Wally, he does try...
This is such an interesting series!