Whoa! Excellent! Your Wally is so lovable.:) Outstanding characterizations. Very consistent. Of course, I particularly liked the scene in the cafe. You conveyed Wally's surprise and confusion quite well, while laying out his unique personality. You also do great action. The best part of this chapter, however, was the ending. The expectant feel of the open window was marvelous.
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on 2006-06-28 12:45 am (UTC)Kudos.