I love how you are with relationships -- not just the obvious one between Wally and Bruce. Wally's thoughts, insecurities, wishes are so wistful and sweet. Jonn's guilt and Wally's pep talk. It's all so wonderful. I love what Jonn reads from Bruce. It makes a story that much more enjoyable when you craft moments and thoughts like these. It gives it so much substance. It's that much more special.
And the humor is just delicious! I love Wally and Jonn talking during the meeting. Kind of like passing notes and almost getting caught time and time again. And having Jonn and Wally race for the ice cream. It's probably moments like that that keep them sane after all they've seen and had to deal with.
This was sweet and funny
on 2006-05-28 05:52 pm (UTC)And the humor is just delicious! I love Wally and Jonn talking during the meeting. Kind of like passing notes and almost getting caught time and time again. And having Jonn and Wally race for the ice cream. It's probably moments like that that keep them sane after all they've seen and had to deal with.
I love this story more and more. Thanks!
Christina