I'm hoping that the purpose of the pace was to make the reader feel like they were driving down the highway at 150mph, because it worked. I actually feel kinda dizzy.
Snarky Bat-people. Gotta love them.
I like how you're mixing in all these other events that happened and throwing in cameos when you can. It really gives it the DC feel, since they just LOVE to throw in cameos.
You're putting out these chapters fast. Don't burn yourself out.
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on 2006-07-09 08:22 am (UTC)Snarky Bat-people. Gotta love them.
I like how you're mixing in all these other events that happened and throwing in cameos when you can. It really gives it the DC feel, since they just LOVE to throw in cameos.
You're putting out these chapters fast. Don't burn yourself out.